In the words of Thoreau...
"If a man does not march with the group, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer."
I dread to think of where the man following this tune is going.
this man is walking alone.
Aaah, my ears! My goodness, ach! Urghh!
That was the most horrible sound I've ever heard. I was almost literally sickened by it. It not only perfectly fits the theme but covers everything you have there.
After listening through, I notice that you did do a good job at making one of the most horrible disharmonies and off key sounding pieces I have ever heard.
This song honestly makes no sense. It's funny because I had to do a song like this once at orchestra camp. The teacher gave us an outline on how the song is "supposed" to sound and basically let us play whatever we wanted as long as it was relatively similar to the outline. It really made no sense either. And it sounded horrible.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.