You did a good job on it, maybe... Just add a bit more bass for a bit better rhythm, but otherwise good, but look at your listens, votes and then downloads, wouldn't there be at least 10000 listens with the 23000 downloads? :O?
Firstly let's say I liked the track. Ok now, that snare you used...was bad choice. It just didn't fit with the other sounds. everything else is pretty crisp. The same goes for that cymbal/hat thing that hits on the 1st and 3rd beats. The guitars though we're smooth and that bell was nice. Very asian like flavor. And you could have done without the organ in general. All in all the song was in general disjointed and had a strange form. But that's fine for what it is.
I really like this.
Were there cell phone tones in this? lol
this is minted
mint tune dude
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.