well this one was a lot better then the last 1...

Godly Encounter, the offbeat with the string on that one is a bit difficult to make a story out of that one, but this one is easier, you could make like some god was being ready to come out during a war, and your getting to see the whole beast come out of the portal, after like one of some leader, the god hasn't gotten all its powers since hes isn't fully powered, hes still a bit rusty on his magic.
dies hows that?

Not bad

A new god doesn't mean a better one. Not your best, but this is still pretty awesome, nice intro!