A song I haven't completed, but this is two days in the process. This is actually one of the first songs that I'm making, so please be helpful.
Nice start!
your track has a good sound cordination. I actually am not a fan of the blip bass you used seemed to be a little distracting. You also could use an equalizer on the opening synth it seems to distort a little at points.
keep up the good work and you will be writing full songs in no time.
if you need more help aim or email me I have years of experience when it comes to mastering a track.
connection
at :33 i liked how you didnt blast that synth that came in, nice ove but i would have liked the bass to come in stronger at :55, try switching the melody up, it sounds common, but it has promise to be interesting, your synthesis at the end was good, everything connected well
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
darkriku12 
