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I'm still very new to the art of creating music so don't vote too harshly. This only took about 40 minutes to make, so it's not perfect.

I please ask you to get past the first 30 seconds before you vote. The main melody is a LOT better than that boring intro.



after the 40 seconds of the begining.. is bad.. i dont like at all.. the piano after that is really good.. but... when there is only piano.. and the background sound.. mmm.. is bad.. sorry.. i mean at time 1:00.. jeje..


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Yo dude, if ppl think ur transitions aren't very good, then im scared to see wat ppl say about mine. I mean, the transitions arent perfect, but they're pretty good. I would call this classical, either.


needs more cowbell. other than that not bad

pyrobunny9 responds:


Don't rush music!

You have great ideas in the track. don't rush. instead figure out how to transition from your begining to your next verse. 40 minutes is a very short amount of time to work on a song. just become immersed in your project and see where you can go. I see potential here if you can get in the groove to expand.

pyrobunny9 responds:

I know what you mean, but I try not to make my projects very long because I'm only using FL demo. Besides, I didn't think that the transition was THAT bad.

it was not unpleasent

well i will tell you one thing, dont ever worry about what people think of the intro, the intro sets the mood, so good job with that. your drums could have used a litle more reverb and i think you would have achieved the exact emotion you were going for, your lead that comes in around 50 needs to be a little softer and not so abrupt when it is introduced, it needs to sound more like a pad. a pad can be a gentle synth sound used for filling up the background so it makes the song sound more full and thy can create atmosphere

i actually really liked the piano part you made for this, thats good stuff, and the bass at the beginning was actually pretty cool.

keep working, you have a great start!

pyrobunny9 responds:

Ok, I'll try to work on those drums for my next song. Like I said i'm still new.

Yeah, I sorta regret adding that little thing around 50. It's really out of place. Unfortunately I can't change it because I was uing the FL demo and I lost the file for it :l

Thankyou very much for an in depth review. I appreciate it.

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3.20 / 5.00

Nov 6, 2008
11:25 PM EST
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1.4 MB
1 min 15 sec

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