Nice work. I think it needs a second set of drums that are just as heavy but not as muffled. a nasty snare or hat would do the trick. you could even be creative and make it sound like gun shots or whatever.
good luck if you want more advice let me know.
I'm not to thrilled with it but I couldn't give it a bad score because it's something I don't usually listen to. However, I think Zyrotech hit the nail on the head with his soul description of the song. Good war song.
your response means much thankx!
Hard and industrial. Can't wait to hear the rest.
thank you very much! *^-^*
sorta hard to do my soul thingy here... AH! ive got it!
Sort of an army scene... it starts off where you see a group of soldiers form a line after being dropped off by choppers and aim. a then you see a HUGE enemy army come up. at 1:21 theres like the 1st armies leader calmly walk in front of the soldiers and thrust his hand forward, telling the soldiers to open fire! then he rushes forward with a sword and starts slashing the hell outta the enemies. at the end of the song you see all the enemies dead and the leader has his sword resting on his shoulder...
not one of my normal soul descriptions but its whatever comes to me! good job! 5/5
Thank you yet again for an amazing responce to my music, war was exactly whut I had in mind with this tune.although rather then swords i picture guns,much bloodshed,and I kinda wanted to have a song based around Josef Mengele"The Angle of Death",but aside from that your response is right on track. Thank you again!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.