This is repetitive and I understand u made it will loops.. for i wont really judge that.. thats my personal opinion.. other than everything mixed well cept the drums.. the drums sounded too high in volumne actually and it took away from the beautiful sound of the piano.. also if u can I would try to add not buildups but little "filler" pieces in between transition on your loops cause it makes the song sound choppy if u dont which also again removes from the beautifulness.. the key to writing a good sad or happy beautiful tune that gives u chills is to use long and smooth connections between your notes.. also dynamical contrast is a must.. if one instrument is over heard then it can ruin the whole thing..
but all in its decent for like i said just loops put together and mixed.. lets hear some original composition from ya? keep me informed if u post anything like that up
i agree with you... there is a lot of repitition in that song... lol. if you're talking about "original" as in not being a cover or a mix of anything, that's going to be awhile until i post anything like that because I don't have the necessarry tools for that yet... I did however post a very nice mix of a song up... you should give me some feed back on what you think of those songs.