not too shabby...
for a first loop
try diversifying (something i had to learn the hard way)
dont make my mistake
and keep up the good work
Its the same again and again..
try to combine it a little bit more.. but if this is ur first loop gj!
But it needs more.. i say this because it could have been done better..
Alright i'll remix it. This time there will be a more powerful and followable melody.