preaty cool

ok thath was great maybe i can put it on my ipod
continue like this

Nice One

dude that a cool tune you made there can understand what you mean about the guitars but still cool none the less keep it up

The melody is great!

The only problem is that your using a computer software to create the sound of distorted guitars and it's very difficult to do so and give it that real ballsy sound you want. The only suggestion would be to spend a bit of cash and get yourself a really high end guitar producing program. I would say the same about the drums too, i hear great things about EZ Drummer, i don't know I've never tried it but I've heard other songs that people have used it and it sounds pretty good. Of course you can never replace the actual sounds the live instruments will give you but hey not everyone can play guitar or drums. But keep experimenting and keep it metal!

I've listened to everything you have made

and your leads are always fantastic, no doubt; however, your bass is fairly generic and the drumkit is always lacking.

dude

i really suggest that you do those keyboard notes on the distorted guitar.
but its still awesome