The Birth

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This song is an original, written and performed by me.

This came out fantastically. . . except for one thing that bugs me. Apparently my recording program cannot record some really-high pitched sounds so some of the notes are kind turned into dead-sounds. If you pay attention you will see exactly what I mean.

About halfway through or around the 1:30 mark you get to hear my pee-an-ah skills and that is about it for the song. Not much more I can add.

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Not bad at all

Ah, I'm rather tired. I usually do very in-depth and lengthy reviews, but my exhaustion is preventing my eloquence from fully emerging tonight; my apologies. I felt, however, that I had to review this simply because I like it so much. As all good things go, however, it does need some work.
The song captures a beautiful, sad/cryptic mood that immediately enthralls one's imagination and plays with it like a puppet. Very well done, on the mental aspect.
The practical aspect is where you need some work, however. If you've played any early Sega games, you might recognize the sound at the very beginning (starting at about 0:05, I think). While you /almost/ pulled that off, it still sounds a bit like Sonic the Hedgehog. Perhaps if you tried lessening the computer-ish-ness?
Oh, and very good job on the piano! I'm a fan of piano (usually within techno) so please give us all some more of this work! Overall, very good, tweak it a bit and you've got a masterpiece on your hands =)
Ah, I'm more verbose than I thought XD

You Could..

You could work on it some more, it sounds kinda rough. All the less, 7/10

ManMadeKing responds:

Thank you for the advice and review. Fuckin' faulty recording devices and mrrhrrmmm. . . .

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3.79 / 5.00

Nov 4, 2008
11:19 PM EST
File Info
2.3 MB
2 min 32 sec

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