Not bad at all
Ah, I'm rather tired. I usually do very in-depth and lengthy reviews, but my exhaustion is preventing my eloquence from fully emerging tonight; my apologies. I felt, however, that I had to review this simply because I like it so much. As all good things go, however, it does need some work.
The song captures a beautiful, sad/cryptic mood that immediately enthralls one's imagination and plays with it like a puppet. Very well done, on the mental aspect.
The practical aspect is where you need some work, however. If you've played any early Sega games, you might recognize the sound at the very beginning (starting at about 0:05, I think). While you /almost/ pulled that off, it still sounds a bit like Sonic the Hedgehog. Perhaps if you tried lessening the computer-ish-ness?
Oh, and very good job on the piano! I'm a fan of piano (usually within techno) so please give us all some more of this work! Overall, very good, tweak it a bit and you've got a masterpiece on your hands =)
Ah, I'm more verbose than I thought XD
You could work on it some more, it sounds kinda rough. All the less, 7/10
Thank you for the advice and review. Fuckin' faulty recording devices and mrrhrrmmm. . . .