i love the guitar and the violin used in the song, but the lyrics couldve been better.
if i had a girlfriend ide show this song to her in a heart beat. like i said very sweet
-said by the amazing master muffin-
"jonas brothers feel"
I don't real like the Jonas Bros in particular haha but I like their music, esp. they're melodies. Your melodies are really good and quite similar to theirs. The only advice I would give you is to spend more time on your lyrics cause your melodies are too good to waste!
btw your voice isn't bad at all :)
Of fuck jonas brothers? aha, well whatever, as long as it's good i can live with it. Thanks man
i like, might want to work on some different synonyms for your verse lyrics, it would work alot better if they rhymed.
also the guitar sounds really really synth, bit of a put off.
but warm song =D
a sunshine over my head
great song dude, your voice is the kind of voice for that kind of songs, you shall variate a little bit the guitar
Don't mind the singing? It matches so perfectly! lol like polly bleaker from Juno in the end song... you do however cause... what's it called, that air boof effect on the microphone, and maybe the guitar sounds sorta like mandolin in the high part, but besides that thoroughly enjoyed ^_^
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