Look, I ain't hatin on you player, but I just think that you could do a lot better.. If you have to curse in every line then it shows no creativity, and no offense but most of your lines don't make that much sense. What I can tell from the first few lines is that your bi-sexual and a hermaphordite. I'm just trying to give constructive criticism. Oh and one more thing. You might wanna think on these lyrics more, because I have an 11 year old son who can probably come up with lines exactly like these.