Good, but not amazing
It's pretty well done. You've got a nice beat and a good use of the synths. But it's really lacking in the kick drum and especially the snare, the 2 areas where DnB mainly focus.
My suggestion would be to find a heavier hitting bass, and a much more powerful snare with less of a ring to it and more of a crack. The song has some potential though.
Not bad, I like the drum and the snare. Pretty nice rhythm you've got there. The bass give s it a slightly nice spooky feeling. Thought the snare could be more powerful and clear. A more interesting electric synth could help this song sound more interesting.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.