i can definitely see the ideas!
Your ideas portraying the scenario is indeed very clear, however as a trance song there are some things that are to be pointed out!!
I think the vocal prepare to launch should come right before your main riff, the big climax of the song, it fits a whole lot better!
Your first melody entrance at 1:15 is good but before it instead of the vocals i think another type of sound (like a reverse crash)
id like to c more use of some cymbals, they are life and breath to a trance song
your ability to add fitting melodies are already there, just keep it up!
its quite a unique trance song really, it just lacks some of the basic elements however i see potential here. and yes the jumbled sounds at the end is very good, i thought before reading the comments that it was your final climax, but yes it could be defined as the mixed feelings/memories!
i did like the ending though, did it say..go f ur self?? hahaha