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I like to think of this as Us, any of us just lying in a hospital bed, no idea wether or not we'll ever leave it, comatose and not bound to awake anytime soon. All that is acknowledged by your subconcious is your beeping machine keeping you in this world, and the memories of your past. Happy ones, not sad ones, hence the music. lol... and the Prepare for launch, I only used because It simulates something kind of an 'environment'. Basically instead of saying clear, everytime the patient is zapped music once again resumes... but I didn't have anything to signal that "Clear". Oh well. Hope you enjoy anyway.

Please review.

EDIT: Forgot to mention that the jumbled sounds near the end represent multiple memories occuring at once... which then would've been quickly replaced by the patient's death, but then I though not to make it so sad and depressing, and he lives. ^_^

And If you want it to seem nice I recommend the 'Portal' vizualization.

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i can definitely see the ideas!

Your ideas portraying the scenario is indeed very clear, however as a trance song there are some things that are to be pointed out!!
I think the vocal prepare to launch should come right before your main riff, the big climax of the song, it fits a whole lot better!

Your first melody entrance at 1:15 is good but before it instead of the vocals i think another type of sound (like a reverse crash)

id like to c more use of some cymbals, they are life and breath to a trance song

your ability to add fitting melodies are already there, just keep it up!

its quite a unique trance song really, it just lacks some of the basic elements however i see potential here. and yes the jumbled sounds at the end is very good, i thought before reading the comments that it was your final climax, but yes it could be defined as the mixed feelings/memories!

4/5 10/10!

i did like the ending though, did it say..go f ur self?? hahaha

monk1 responds:

Yeah lol....through that in there... Appreciate it very much! In all honesty, I'm never sure which hats to use. But I really Appreciate the review! It's good to know this song turned out well! ^_^

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Oct 31, 2008
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