Oooh! Now this reminds me of Frank Klepacki's work a little bit. The sounds are really pleasing to me. The way the bass moves, the way the synths are so soft, and the way the drums are abstract... it's just so lovely. I'm judging your song individually from the other one, and I'm still very pleased with this. Please, make more music like this! You're good at it! Keep up the superb work!
P.S. Look Frank Klepacki up, and listen to his music from the Command & Conquer series. Mainly, look up the Command & Conquer Red Alert 2 soundtrack on his site in the bottom player, and check it out for yourself. One of his songs is like this one here. A masterpiece. =]