Actually, I like the way this sounds. The name of your two songs are repulsive, because they just seem robotic and without a mindful flavor. However, the taste of the music itself is sweet, and has a hint of darkness to it. I like that a lot. It's another Silent Hill-ish treat for the night! Can't wait to hear your second one! Keep up the great work!
This one makes me want to move, its progression flows like a river-rapid over a declining surface. I would not go as far to extend that this is anything relative to a sub-par horror mantra... But I agree, it has a dark-tantrum effect on it- this and especially Scrap Hands.
**I have been trying to work on these two clips, although it is rather difficult to disassemble a clip (by my defenition is usually just me shitting-loops and slightly variating them) and then try and stretch it into something much more grandiose. I'll often lose the vibe that I was going for from the sole originating clip/loop.
Ugh... Much work.