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A Song for A Girl

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this song was written a while ago but i realized as i listened to it the other day that it reminded me of well "that special someone" very cliche i know, but what ever =]


It's all right

But, it just seems that you followed an instruction manual.
Step 1 Opening riff
Step 2 Adding a new riff at the end of every bar.
Step 3 Then stick in a fill.
Step 4 Repeat Step 1 and 2.
Step 5 fade out by taking out a riff at the end of each bar.

Not that that's a bad thing. It's a pretty song. But it just feels simple, and nothing interesting happens, no key changes or break downs or anything. Maybe your other work has that in it, or will, I don't know.

And next time, please don't use a dodgy electronic rumba beat. It sounds cheap, as if you got it off a mobile phone program or something.

Anyway, it's good, don't get me wrong. It's a simple song, and it's a good simple song at that. But, find a different drum beat, and try something different, mix it up a bit. Just little things really, you've got a good musical head on those good musical shoulders. Keep it up.

pretty good

i like it but i dont really care for it, honestly

good job though

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3.91 / 5.00

Oct 30, 2008
4:29 PM EDT
File Info
2.9 MB
2 min 26 sec

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