Your synths are perfect for the job. Your drums fit your synths which fit your melody, which fits your voice and whatever kind of thing you were going for here. Excellent intro, progression, and that messy bass was effectively countered by your pads and voice..basically there is very good balance here. Great mixing, and very well formed atmosphere.
If I had to choose something to complain about, I'd probably call your outtro. It just ...ended. Just like that. I felt that for this kind of piece and especially comparing it to your intro, it's too abrupt. Like, not that pleasant kind of abrupt ending, but more like something else was coming to slow it down, but it never showed up. Anyway, good job on this! I can definitely see this in one of those sci-fi, actiony movies. :)
At first I was wondering why this sounded so familiar....then I remembered a song that my friend created and it was the vocal that triggered that memory. His song had somthing along the lines of your loop, but he put more into it. Not to dis you tho, he put a lot of money into his vocal lessons. His song wasn't anything like this, tho. Nonetheless, great song and great style.
Overall that was pretty good, but it got a bit boring after awhile. Maybe throught some more pizazz in there, if you know what I mean
I found this very inspirational.
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