This is pretty good. I thought the bass that comes in around :30 was either too hard or too loud...or both. Also, I felt that the vibrato from 1:00-1:20 was not necessary. I like the beginning the most, up until :30 seconds was the best section I think. The rest was pretty good but I wasn't thrilled about it. Good job. Hope my review is usefull as all reviews should be.
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