Its alright but...
I think you could change up the sounds and possiably add a rthyum to it like drums or possiably some bass. I'll give ya credit becouse Fl is hard and complecated and takes some practice. It was a good try though for ur first loop.
Hope you find your own style of music through Fl, and Goodluck! :D
Okey thanks! I'll try some of that next time.