not really my style but try not to be so repetitive with it. Mabe try and get it alittle more upbeat I start liking it around 2 50. Start the cool attention grabbers alittle earlier or even make two parts ya know. Keep it up
ok dude try to word ur sentences so they dont sound so harsh. but whatever i know what i am doing
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