This has aunique sounds
Now this was something different, while not exactlyperfect i still found this to be an interesting piece, and as i played this a few times it came more clear of how much effort did go into this so nice effor on this. Now this has a unique sound to it, its got a good vibe and its more on a deeper touch then a light feel,I felt it was kind of short though maybe you can stretch it out abit more later, buti like how you did this with even the piano mix in there so nice job on this piece. And now that i have heard this a few times now i must say this one really grew on me, i like this entry because its a unique style and you did put the effort in to show something unique.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so i think i have some things you could work on not sure it will be much but try some things out and these optionc can only make it slightly better but hope it does help out so look into some of these options if you have the time. And so i didnt find much to improve on as this was a pretty solid piece, but i did think you could make this one longer and stretch out the sounds more, so try some things out.