I do thing making it longer would improve...

but this the real stuff, I think this song is really cool, maybe a little short, but you feel in the motion. I also really like that sort of video gamish feeling to it, which is goes really good with it. I have the impression that in this song we refind the feeling of your song "Escape", like I said, video gamish, pulse pumping, action packed, and perfect for a dark urban action scene. If you don't understand all, I'm sorry, maybe a little too much into this song.
Keep it going,

GX3

Kinda cool in the middle

You need to make this longer. If you did this in 20 minutes, I'd really like to see what you can do with a few days of work! I the glitch noises and panning. Sounds REALLY compressed, though. Did you use garageband, cause if you did, make sure to use garageband's compressor, not iTunes's. Anyway, I liked where this is going. Be careful, though: if you extend it, try to be original. I can tell you've got originality going through this piece, but being so short it could lean any way, and you might come out with another average-sounding rave song. And I don't think we need too many more of THOSE on the website. ANyway, PM me if you extend it, I would like to hear!

can't say its your best.

but its still damn good man! hahah we all get kinda bored and write stuff like this from time to time! Still sexy!

Wyldfyre1

Rename the song "So Bored" to "So Awesome!"

It is simple, yet so well constructed. Catchy. Amazing what you can do in 20 minutes.

Sounds like inside of a ticking, clock-work-like mechanism yet crashing to a halt due some failure in the machinery. Then rebooting with the same problem.

haha Zajed

oh man is this that song you showed me this morning? really nice. diffrent