I really enjoyed the first minute and last minute of the song. the soundscape you created flows well to the ideas you have. Like your friend below who gave you a lot of valuable feedback I agree with him.
Woow this song could go perfect for a light aura acount. And its so easing to hear nice work!
Light aura account, you say? Hmm...
Now this actually gave me an idea for a track. Thanks a lot! =)
I can see the sound that you're going for. Make it more mellow, don't add those weird synthy blips in, and opt for more ambient or glitch basslines, and add some distortion to your upper EQ. That's what I would do, at least. I like how you're trying to mix the straight up synths with ambient (keep trying weird stuff like that, you might just find something really cool!), but it's not working out too great. If you want to keep using the weird blippy synths, make them more complicated, and mix them up a bit. The song got really repetitive after awhile. Also, you might want to try changing it into a minor key, but then again, you don't hear much music like this in a major key, so it really helps add originality :) . I liked it toward the end when you had all your tracks running. I would have given you a 5/10, but I like the originality, so +2 makes 7/10. PM me if you remaster it!
Oh, and by the way, you don't need to credit soundsnap, it's actually legal to use their stuff commercially, I read their license (I really love that site). Thanks for uploading!
Thank you very much, for the critics. I'll remember them in the future.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.