It remind me in a film not you?
Great melody. However, once again, you need stronger drums. And more unique instruments. Try using something other than piano and bass. Or try combining synths with pianos and bass.
I can tell......
That you use FL Studio and that you used FL Keys, Boobass, FPC and FL Slayer when making this song. As a person who's used FL studio since april of this year on about 40 songs, I know what every plugin sounds like now. Additionally, you used Simsynth in one of your other songs. I can tell because simsynth just can't seem to be very manipulable in terms of sound, I have found. It's good stuff though. Maybe I'll upload one of my first songs.
Your correct. I did use all those lol.