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Breathless demo

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Shayne Wards song titled breathless.....i think the genres wrong.....sorry



Has a nice style to it. I liked when it picked up at 1:13. Just IMO there should be a little part with a more intense kick and a nice synth lead. But still great job.

Congratz on top 30!


Champius responds:

thanks a lot man,, i seriously didn't even know i was in the top thirty, until five minutes ago and yeah i might resubmit without that weak unneeded kick

thanks a lot for the review : )

hmm ..

nice pieno skills >____<

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Champius responds:


nice job

first of all, i would like to tell you taht the genre isnt wrong, this sounds very much like a Trance song. It sounded great, the piano sounded very relaxing, but fast paced, and the (chorus?) that kicked in at around 0:47 sounded amazing behind the piano. And the picked up beat and transition into a fast paced techno song at around 1:12 sounded great. The transition was excellent and didnt frazzle me. It flowed nicely and had a really great melody, the dynamics were good and steady, and the tempo was just right. Excellent work here, 5/5 from me, keep up the good work mate :)

Champius responds:

thank you so much ; ] i really love reviews like yours they make me smile so much

Anyways II really appreciate it! : ))

its good, but not that good:)

Worth a 7/3. the piano part is nice but i actually dindt like the trance part that much...
I really think you should try classical style instead of trance music.

But if you want to make trance anyway, i encourage you to make more steady and happy/sad melody's, they better fit in with the trance.

Still a good song, good for a download to my newgrounds playlist :)

Champius responds:

Thanks for the input man, and the download : )


Amazing Piece My Friend, Also Congrats on Top 30 :) 10/10 \\ 5/5

Champius responds:

Oh my gosh wow i didn't even know i made the top thirty....thanks for the review

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Credits & Info


4.28 / 5.00

Oct 24, 2008
2:05 PM EDT
File Info
2.7 MB
2 min 23 sec

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