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Breathless demo

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Shayne Wards song titled breathless.....i think the genres wrong.....sorry


It does fit the name.

It was okay. You could have done better.


where do i get the full version?

Needs more refining

I like: the piano. The rhythm was smooth and easygoing, and I felt like it was a respectable piece where it was headed.

I dont like: All of the beats you introduced felt like the drowned your piano into nothingness. Its like you tried to turn the song around into a techno/rave dance piece while struggling to make your piano fit. In the beginning, with your choir sound thing it sounded like you were building up to a climax that never happened, which was a bit disappointing.

I also think your actual kick could have been done better, but you seem to know that already.

I look forward to hearing any of your future submissions C:

Champius responds:

yeah, this was done a little while ago, and i honestly don't even know how it mad the top 30??

though, i didn't really have any intention on turning this into a rave of any sort, i do know what you mean sorta

and yeah the kick sucks.....

i've submitted a handful of others since this so if you wanted to hear any future submissions submitted in the future of when this was submitted <<(doesn't really make sense) ....then check out my page

thanks for your review and your time : ]


I think it would've been better if the piano took the whole song. The beat didn't harmonize well with the intro, and the "ahh" singing in the background was kind of sharp.

Champius responds:

especially the kick.....

Anyway thanks for the great input! and perhaps i'll make one with just the piano....

but prolly not......but maybe, i dunno

Memory bringin'

This was an experience I'd like to face every day : ) In the first part it brings back all my good memories, wich ain't much of, but still.. they're there, I LOVE IT.
*Will Listen To Everyday, maybe transfer to my phone or iPod*

Champius responds:

thanks for the great review!!

And i certainly hope you have lots of good memories in the future!

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Credits & Info


4.28 / 5.00

Oct 24, 2008
2:05 PM EDT
File Info
2.7 MB
2 min 23 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.