it's got a nice rythm, but i agree with Jeffaro that it's missing a little something
The song is a bit too long and it needs more vareity.Its not a bad song it just needs some fixing up.
Try messing around with it some more.
2 and a half minutes is too long?
Wow you are impatient then... lol...
I actually wanted this to be 3 minutes
Cuz its too short. Lol, thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.