lame sounds try to mess with the tunes and knobs don't be in such a hurry to upload your work take your time
And put work and Time into your music try to get new sounds.
You have some great rhythms here. The music is pretty good, but you're making what I see as a common misstep. The song doesn't really change throughout you just add and take away various layers.
But that aside it's not bad at all, it's just not easy for my to get into music that doesn't mix it up. This doesn't sound very initiative... but you have potential.