I like the piano and the drums quite a bit, though some volumes could be changed.
For me personally I like a heavy clap, so I would increase the volume on that for sure. Also the bass drum could use a bit more, but not too much.
I think the trance lead doesn't fit very well. Maybe try different instrumentation for that and use a more classical instrument, since hip-hop is generally tied closer to classical music (believe it or not) than trance music.
:o oh really, next i will go for more classical instruments then :)
ty for te comment
Alright little tune
Okay. Not great, but not bad. Keep trying, tho! Too much marathon-like choir noises.