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Criticism, positive or negative, would be greatly appreciated. This way I'll be able to write future music even better.

Took me a lot of time to produce, so please no abuse.

(not drum n bass, more like, breakbeat, gabber, hardcore techno)


Hmm... Strange.

It's certainly different, but NOT MY style. Okay I know that people should be more open to different styles, but this isn't your every day cake, it's really weird, most like to ENJOY music, but this sounded like... You shouln't be having to enjoy it, or something...

It doesn't do any good to your emotions, which is something that i search for in music. It's just sounds random.

It doens't motivate, it's not beautiful, it's... empty.

I'm sorry i'm bad at leaving constructive critisicm, but the best i can say is, that your music doesn't seem to have a soul. or something. o.O

Try to have more then just a beat, and vocals. The vocals were scaring me by the way. The beat was cool, but quite standard, try to think of original and enjoyable music.

trzymalpy responds:

its within no obligation to be open to different styles. everybody has their own tastes!
in terms of emotions, many can find emotions in this type of music, since there already is a large audience that follows this "genre". many refer to it as hardcore techno and it can be found all over the world. here's an example of a french hardcore artist by the name of hellfish, which youll hear similar production techniques.

maybe "it doesn't do any good to YOUR emotions" however my emotions and obviously those of the other reviewers of this track remain well uplifted.
beauty is in the eye of the beholder. id like to ask about this soul which you seek. ive put enourmous amounts of soul into this track and maybe you are simply having difficulty interpreting.
a track by eric lewis which many consider beautiful

randomness is also a subjective view. john cage is a contemporary classical composer and creator of what we now call "chance music". the element of composition surrounds the idea of "random." id consider my track much more structured in comparison. (im also not implying that this track can even be compared to john cage's genius)

whats your definition of a non-standard beat? have you heard anything that plays on the radio? that seems to follow a standard with which i doubt this track complies with.
id like to know also what you may consider as original, since every artist in the world has been influenced in one way or the other, has drawn inspiration from something that already exists. originality doesnt come in the form of something new, but simply in the direction that something is taken and pushed forward.

thank you for opinion and i hope to hear from you again.



You've sure got some Funky Groove kid. I can really get down to this.
Drum N' Bass isn't always my thing, but I have to say that some of this whacky groove has some real attitude. The vocals help a lot and change enough not to be too repetitive. I'll admit it's just 30 seconds shy of too long for my taste, but this was fun. Thanks for reviewing me trzymalpy. To return in kind, I'm rating you a 7 and voting you a 4. Later man.

The beat... is... PERFECT!

Seriously, the beat in this song blew my mind. I loved this track. It's going on my Zune. Your hard work payed off. Great voice sampling, great drum loops, perfect beat, it's just great. I loved it. 10/10, 5/5 from me, kid.

2.81/5.00 just blows my mind. You deserve something way higher than that. You have a ton of potential. I want to see more from you. You could really go somewhere with your music, I'm not just blowing steam. I know my techno, it's all I listen to. This is good stuff!

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Credits & Info


3.16 / 5.00

Oct 21, 2008
11:34 AM EDT
Drum N Bass
File Info
5.2 MB
3 min 46 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.