Not bad, keep it up.
I see what you were going for and it was pretty good for the style, but there is way too much distortion on the track. Bad mixing can ruin a good song bro. Try raising your buffer rate or turning down the volume on some of your channels. I like the DnB section right before it goes back into the distortion part. What program you use? Maybe I can help you clean up the track...
the flow of the song is not so smooth, and the last minute is a bit too noisy and garbled, maybe cleaning it up and making the beat stick out would improve that part. The beats are good, but some synths sound too distorted. Good, but needs more work.
A bit more house than dance, I suppose, at least in the tracks first minute, and at the end it's mostly DnB, heh. As soon as the first minute is throughgone it sounds great, but before that it's a tad bit monotone, anyhow, keep it going!
o.0 lets say... almost-core
the bass is kicking, and it could sound okay but there is one or another really weird filter that pulls all your sound back to a certain level that its not even clear anymore what happends... I seriously wonder if you are aware of the crappy sound which this ends up... I know a LOT about hardcore so you dont have to explain me any point of view.. I would say... check youtube for angerfist and dj promo... cause on this way you will not sell anything... but that is just my point of view...
haha,, promo is messy at the best of times and angerfist is a tad commercial these days..
the filter you would be referring to affecting all the sounds,, i use a filter on a channel,,
do you mean a compressor?? i think i used one on the master channel ,, or could it be that you may kno some commercial hardcore,, but nothing of production ??
ok,, guy before that house?? where do you come from ??
dnb ,, oh,,, is that because I used the amen break ??
I suggest you read up on the definition of monotone before using words out of context as I find monotone to be an offensive description =p
the first guy ,, thanks bro,, yea it needs to be cleaned up,, mastered
do you think that the synth is distorted or that some of the layers may come through a little too much toward the end??
one of the layers im using is a junoX2 VST which i think may come through too strong toward in the final melody variation ..
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