what cords did you play in the song?
sorry about the low vote, it sounded decent a.....
the song sounded decent, but when i saw it had been voted a 5, i expected more, it was the same thing over and over and over. add some chord changes, spice it up abit , and try to sound a little less choppy. it was good though, i didn't vote any lower than i'd want on any of my own submissions, you should take that progession, and work with it, that could make a good intro for something.