This is good! I think that the kick could use just slightly more bass but other then that this song rocks!
Nice first, much better than my very first ^_^ Love the sequencers ;) For improvements you could try increase the volume of the kick and try look through the fl defaults for extra pads to add to the feeling. Although it's a little bit repetitive it's still great for a first!
Good luck with your future songs :D Pm me if you need any further help.
I could supply you with some nice sounds to use.
Very good stuff bro. Intro is very nicely done. Only thing I can say to improve on it would be to add more Climax parts. Didn't feel like there was a part that was really IN YOUR FACE! lol but seriously good shit/
yeh thanks i plan on working on this song more and tryin to throw in and like "OMFG MY FACE HURTS IT HIT ME SO HARD" cimax :p thank you for feedback xD
you got some skill, this is really fuckin sweet, the only thing i might sya is up the volume on the bass, and there are somparts when it sounds like the melody gets offbeat like .01 of a second, its subtle but it is still there
thanks for feed back, but yeh i really im thinking about re-doing the song to make the transitions better and such instead of just throwing them in, also yeh i think the hit is off a little and its been bugging me, once again thank you for your feedback xD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.