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BIG THANKS TO Dj-Br3ndo for helping me get started with this, and pushing me to make something at least half way decent xD

like it says in the description, this is my first trance/techno like song i have ever made, so of cores its not going to be the best, but please rate, and give me some serious feed back on were i can improve, thank you xD



This is good! I think that the kick could use just slightly more bass but other then that this song rocks!

Nice work!

Nice first, much better than my very first ^_^ Love the sequencers ;) For improvements you could try increase the volume of the kick and try look through the fl defaults for extra pads to add to the feeling. Although it's a little bit repetitive it's still great for a first!
Good luck with your future songs :D Pm me if you need any further help.
I could supply you with some nice sounds to use.

good stuff

Very good stuff bro. Intro is very nicely done. Only thing I can say to improve on it would be to add more Climax parts. Didn't feel like there was a part that was really IN YOUR FACE! lol but seriously good shit/

dj-iwin responds:

yeh thanks i plan on working on this song more and tryin to throw in and like "OMFG MY FACE HURTS IT HIT ME SO HARD" cimax :p thank you for feedback xD

wow dude

you got some skill, this is really fuckin sweet, the only thing i might sya is up the volume on the bass, and there are somparts when it sounds like the melody gets offbeat like .01 of a second, its subtle but it is still there

dj-iwin responds:

thanks for feed back, but yeh i really im thinking about re-doing the song to make the transitions better and such instead of just throwing them in, also yeh i think the hit is off a little and its been bugging me, once again thank you for your feedback xD

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Credits & Info


4.00 / 5.00

Oct 20, 2008
11:49 PM EDT
File Info
3.1 MB
2 min 44 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.