erm.........try again, dat made me ears bleed.
otherwise i would of said ok, but nasty piano loop put me wright of, change the piano to something more catchy and not 3 notes, other wise it was ok. :p
u just missing the shit i added to it but thats it lol. Maybe i should remix it lol. Its good man. keep it up
thanks man i dident even think to put that part in that u had but ill try it i worked hard on this it is a realy good beat well gatta go peace my n***a