wicked song!keep it up dude!
really felt a LOT of potential in this song! i think you are off to a great start....the hardest thing to me is to make songs not sound empty, and you are off to a great start! your song has a full sound to it...could have a tad more...another synth or melody line added to it....but the tonality of your instrument choices are nice and full....sometimes, i notice people's songs tend to have a weak, 80's sound to their synths...nice work and keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.