very good i like it
I'm sorry i have to be a critic but i think you went a little overboard with the voice. But besides that it's pretty good.
The good: Sounds professionally made, good variety, it changed up just enough to keep things interesting. I'll give it a spin on the MP3 player.
The Bad: I'm sorry but I could have done with less of the "open you mind" voice over. I know that single line voiceovers are a hallmark of this type of music, but if it had been used less I would have been hard-pressed not to vote 10.
After 5 listens to the song:
The good: Does not seem to get old too fast, no parts of it seem to grate on my nerves, strangely soothing.
The Bad: Ummmm the voice over line it not quite as bad as I first thought, but I still think it may have needed to be used less, or perhaps said in another tone or frequency.
You`re right about the voice it gets kinda annoying...