Hmmm, out there
This is an interesting piece. It sounds like the really quick melodic part gets out of time a couple times. The string melody could have progressed to something cooler.
Did you actually come up with that crazy melody or is that randomized or arrpegiated? It sounds pretty complex. And if you did, I'm giving you mad props. Lacked drums. I think it woulda been way cooler with drums.
Great track, keep up the good work and I'm sure you'll improve greatly. Check out my newest song Static Rampage to see what I've done in FL Studio myself.