kirby wants to go to a casino i dont know why
This reminds me of The Sonic Rap by Duane and BrandO!
Dude, you got potential, you should make your own music :O
You are getting better, but I have some suggestions
I like the concept of blending the original with a more rap sound, but the sounds don't complement eachother. The rap sounds didn't really change or add anything to the song, but it almost did. I was waiting too see if it would bring some new sounds to blend more but it didn't.
Don't get me wrong you concept is great, the sounds just didn't go too well together. Just try experimenting more, and you will find it for sure!
The first few seconds sound like Toy Story.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.