You need to work on the tone and some new notes other than dun dun dununun lol Other than that nice
You could really put more work into this. At moments, it sounded off beat, and in general, it's very bare bones.
This song needs a ton of work. I dont mean that as an insult but it seems like a bare basic work. as if you made this to build on. I hate to say it but a very terrable song.
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