i love it great song every thing is just right
Not quite my style.
This is an okay song.
Your guitar sounds kind of like a ukulele. I would mic/EQ it differently. I think some brightness would help.
Vocally, whether it's a vocal choice or just the tempo you've elected to play this song, but it sounds like you're rushing more than singing. It might work if your instrumentation wasn't so laid back. Sibilance is a little rough. A little bit of reverb or delay would make the vocals so much less flat.
Yeah, I definitely am not a fan of the guitar tone you've achieved. Aside from that, it's not a bad song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.