And I think that those pauses and stuff are just absolutely perfect.
I think that this song by now is just perfect in how it is and I see no need to improve something that is actually perfect.
Why I say it's perfect?
Because this song has it's own charm in a way how it is. You either feel the charm of this song or not. Simply put: you love it or hate it.
Some may say it's short. Yes, it's short. But it won't make anyone say it's awful song because of that! Many times it was proven that not the duration of the song, but the song itself is what really counts! I know pretty many songs that despite being pretty short, they are real good(check out Moonlit Roadside here on NG, for example).
However, I don't want to discourage you. Improve it if you feel like it. Make it longer. You can actually make it even better than it is now. You only have to have a will to do it.
I dare you.
PS. Sorry for my English, I don't speak it natively.
thanks for the great review. you're wrong, your english is great !
Very, very well done. The pauses were a bit annoying, but nice anyway.
Could do with some violin or something.
L000ve yahh, lmao.
Yeah, ive gathered that by other reviews, i'll change it when i get a chance.
Terse yet Terrific!
Thanks, it looks asthough im going to release a full classical version then :P
<3 <4 <5
I like it. The emotion you put into this is very clear and obvious as it should be. My only suggestion would be that in the long pauses, at least have some kind of noise going. If even holding a single key for the duration of the silence. Otherwise it just sounds like the pianist forgot the notes, or I don't know... I just don't think it sounds very good?
Violins would go very well with this piece too. But if you wanted to keep this strictly piano, that's respectable.
Also, to answer your question, your score is low because a majority of Newgrounds folks are ADD about their music and can not appreciate slow classical pieces, or ambience etc.
Oh, I was wondering, thanks for the review <3<3<3
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Not bad. Its an simply melodie but its great
Thanks, I wonder why im getting such low reviews.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.