Nice
Nice Bro. I really like your style.
You have a unique taste in blend and sound.
Author Comments
A kinda trippy spacey dark drum and bass song again.
Hope you enjoy!
Please vote and review.
Constructive criticism is appreciate as always
tijnn responds:
That's the idea! ;)
thanks.
WEll...
I can't really say this is bad but I must say this needs hell of an improvement. The drum base first of all is way too repetitive, mix it up so the song will sound more varied. The synth is blurred, must be in volume with the beat. After the middle beat, the drum comes in again but with nothing just a little small blurred synth. Add some catchy piano roll maybe? I don't really know it's your song but for now it lacks a lot. An electric arp would be nice actually somewhere in there, just make it rhyme with the drum base. That's all I gotta say.
tijnn responds:
wellll... All these points you were lighting up that should be improved, im more than sorry but that's just how i want my song to be, i love trance-evoking drum and bass, and if you can't go with the flow, well sorry, then it's not your thing. n_N and for the synths, i love a deep dark overdrived blurry synth like you love your mother hehehehe.
Thanks for the help though.
I like it!
4/5 - 7/8
Has a really cool dark sound and feel. Very good song too, sounds great. I love those synths and pads you used. Only criticism I can give ya is, the drums man. It's not a great Drum 'n' Bass song. DnB is famous for having intense, out of line drums with nice rhythm. But the drums are your song are the same throughout the entire song.
boom-crack, boomboomboom-crack, boom-crack, boomboomboom-crack
Give it some innovation, spice it up :]
tijnn responds:
Well problem is it's my intention to give it that industrial looping feel, and i truly understand that some people might not like that but it's not that im too lazy / unskilled to do so, it's a matter of a minute to make another loop, it's just not what i had in mind mate. THanks though
Well it does have that dark feeling to it.
Some of the instruments are a bit to loud for my tastes. Though it does have that cool dark feeling to it. Possibly a fight song sound or something along those lines. Feels a little hallow and that it needs more. Other then that its not that bad at all. Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
tijnn responds:
Hmm alright, it wasn't filled with all kinds of stuff on purpose and it was my intention to keep it dark and hard, but ah well, not everyone likes that as goes to show ;)
Trip on robitussin...
I love trippin' on DXM...lololol
Robitussin cough gels fuck you up!
:)
tijnn responds:
hahahha, that's right! :P
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4.00 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Oct 13, 2008
- 6:49 PM EDT
- Genre
- Drum N Bass
- File Info
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- 7.8 MB
- 4 min 15 sec
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