Aighty.....lets get started on improving buddy..:)
O.k.....for starts...The loop is fine overall...but..it does have a few issues. First...tempo...it's little low for this song, amp it up a little and it will sound great. Next...I don't know if it's noticable to most...but their is a VERY quick little skip at about 0:35..I mean..it's so fast that I barely even detected it until I listened for about 10 repitions..^_^;...I don't think you need to fix it because it's so small...but feel free to do so...Overall: 5/5, 8;10; and this one is faved...keep it up...your doing great for your first submissions..:)
I'm working on a Remix of this song with some extra sparkle and a higher tempo.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.