While the intro was sound, and I think the first 1:30 were pretty stretched out for an intro, it was still decent. The whole feeling of the song gave a very opressive, marshal feeling to the atmosphere of the song. Although rather repetitive, I see this song being used as a background noise for like a video game. Something that will not draw the attention from the player, yet has an almost droning sound to it to keep a beat going with the person focused into what they are doing. This could also even be used as a work out song for running. Unfortunately the ending is an major epic fail. It was so anti climatic and cut off. Not much of a climax to this song to begin with but to just end it like that was a let down. A simple fade away would have been better then this dude.
If you could keep this song going since it pretty much is just repeating itself after 2 minutes it sounds like. You could make it a long loop, I for one would love a loop like this for working out.
The intro is great but I thought it would build upto something good but it didn't. It just sort of stayed the same all the way through.
Also, it got extremely repetitive. after around 1:20, there were no new melodies or beats. You just seemed to use the same ones in different variations.
I listened to it all the way to the end but there was nothing that got me hooked, and then it just seemed to end very abruptly.
I really don't understand why this took 5 months!? If you listen to my track 'Levitate', that only took me, just under, 4 weeks and I've been quite busy with other things as well.
The general quality of the mixing and effects in the song is very good. The presets you used didn't really hit me in the face like they do in some people's tracks. To be honest, I didn't even realise they were presets until I read it and then thought about it for a bit.
If you ever think about improving this I think you should add more melodies and try to make the main song differ from the introduction. Also, add an 'outro', I don't know if that's an actual word but you get what I mean, add a gradual ending.
Lastly, sorry if I come across as really harsh. I don't mean to be. It's just that this track didn't really do it for me but you seem quite dedicated and hopefully you can accept some critisicm so I thought I'd tell you exactly what I think.
Thanks, i can take a lot of criticism (it only helps me), so it doesnt matter.
by the way, it didnt took me 5 months in total, but overall (include breaks, holidays, inspirationless e.t.c.). the time i DID take to make it is around 2 weeks though ^^.