The intro just sets the whole song. The way it fades out as the reast of the melody and rhythm comes it. Than they sort of tug of war at the song, the cut to the funky drum solo was great, I loved that. I hope you finish this up and make it even better.
A nice VG sounding trance track, very kind and uplifting, and I love the infading background waves of beatdom. Wish this where longer, but it sounds great regardless, keep it going!
This isn't really trance is it?
This is more of a low down drum and bass. The drum beats are a bit irregular because you have a quiet hi-hat played which puts the audience off.
Good sounds used for the pads.
Lead sounds fine, maybe a tiny bit too sawwy, hide it by using reverb or something.
What you really need is a four to the floor beat. That drum solo in the song isn't really needed if you want to make it trance. This could actually be a great trance song if you do a verse/chorus strucutre, make it trancy, etc.
Nice job otherwise.