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A fun dance song i put together, semi inspired by video game-esque sound nd generic dance music

Nd criticism welcome...encouraged even!


Very good

I was surprised, from reading the reviews it seemed like it wasn't that good. If I ever get around to getting my drawing tablet, I'm going to make a flash game of some sort. If I EVER do, can I use this song for something? It might be a dating sim of some sort though... I can't garuantee whether the sim would be yaoi or yuri or straight though -.-'. Being bi, I like both. But if I ever do, could I? Pretty please?

gets annoying at times

the clapping noises are overused, as is the higher pitched beep sound once you get further into it, it loops well but the high pitched sound should really be knocked back a few notes or replaced all together when they start to pound continually, maybe a solid sound on a lower tone, just my thoughts, good work with the rest of the song though, wasn't a note out of place*

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TheMayo responds:

Thnx I appreciate the review and the criticism


Let's see, then.

Indeed, it does sound like it comes from a video game, possibly Gameboy or Nes.

However, it gets boring because there is no variation and the music in itself is boring.

I may sound harsh, but i didn't say it's bad. What i mean is that it can easily changed into a MUCH better piece with some changes.

First of all, as someone pointed out, it needs bass. Definatly. I would personnally add some other instruments, maybe long strings playing some chords.

With that said, i wish you best and will add that practice is the secret.

(§ Jorma Poyer AKA Deflektor §)
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TheMayo responds:

thnx for the review...I will consider everything for future projects

Well balanced

I could see this being the sort of tune that would be on the hi-score page of any game, just a little ambience for it. The only real problem with that being that this tune would seem a little involving for that sort of track.

Not to worry, you could certainly use it as a backing track for a platformer or a real time strategy game. With regards to the beat, it runs nicely through the track, but the higher pitched melody that you run over the top of it sometimes clashes with it. Nothing major, it's just something that you need to work on a little more in the mastering stage, as you tweak a note up or down in pitch a little, perhaps removing a few of them altogether, especially near the end, as it just seemed to fall off the rails a little, when it got really busy.

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TheMayo responds:

thnx for the advice
i might look into it


I started listening to this without reading the description or looking at the genre of the track. I instantly thought that this was a video game track. Well, I wasn't totally wrong with that as this was in fact inspired by video game-ish sounds.

It sounds indeed very much like the good old 8bit music we all enjoyed on the NES and other 8bit machines. Only the clapping sound is a bit annoying. It just seems to be overused in too many tracks. Maybe you can change it to a different sound. I think it would help the song to get even better.

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TheMayo responds:

hmm...i can kinda see where ur coming from
but i really dnt kno wat other sounds wud sound ok
thnx for the input

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4.26 / 5.00

Oct 10, 2008
3:23 PM EDT
File Info
5.3 MB
3 min 50 sec

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