Oooh, I like
The loop action seems off, though. It's like a half second pause or something.
Theres a bit of an echo throughout, which makes me think caves or something cavernous. I'm also feeling a sand vibe, as well as something more industrial like a mine or some other kind of machine in the background.
This could be taken towards that sand feeling by copying that sweet echo, adding a bit of reverb, and playing with the bass or muting it a bit; That way the echo might sound like it's bouncing off some sand but also being absorbed by it a bit.
To take it towards that industrial/mine/factory feeling, I think panning the echo from right to left in increments would work. Maybe add a hissing steam thing, iono.
...I am hearing echoes, right?
The echo is a slight reverb
and several mid-high end cutoff filters.
I'll see where this goes.
it sound very awkward... I dont know what to make of it...