You got a pretty cool rhythm going. But it's very repetitive. It is a bit of an annoyance. But it's a pretty cool Hip-Hop type song. That clapping noise in the background is pretty loud tho. Nice job with it tho.
Annoying song to begin with
I suppose you made it mildly better. Still annoying as shit
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.