i myself really liked it and im sure if you put your mind to it you can make a good techno.
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i love this song
this song is great and stuff, but it is way too simple, you need to extend on it way more... but i still love what you did. dont change a thing( unless your sure it will improve it.)
Really kind of fun to listen to. I like it, although I think you need to extend it a bit. Great job though! if you modify the end, you could have a fairly smooth loop going as well.
I agree that it isn't very electronic-ish, and not repetitive--but I didn't really feel like expanding on what I had finished in class... Hence the shortness.
Its definately going to need more then just bass and some piano to be a great techno dance song.
Yeah, it's just a dance song... Not necessarily techno... That's why the piano is the main instrument.